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  1. Posted: August 30, 2012In: Public

    A smart, new classy version of an old west historical tale that has never been told, between a well-dressed clean man of small stature and his dirty giant brutal enemy with a personal vendetta; all of which takes place in a large alluring and immaculately clean gambling hall and infamous brothel, where heaven and hell plays out.

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    Added an answer on August 31, 2012 at 12:02 am

    It's a lot of description, but I don't know what they story is about. What brings them together? What is the personal vendetta. And does it only take place in these two places? The gambling hall and the brothel?

    It’s a lot of description, but I don’t know what they story is about. What brings them together? What is the personal vendetta. And does it only take place in these two places? The gambling hall and the brothel?

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  2. Posted: August 30, 2012In: Public

    Born with all her memories from previous lives, Juliet Jones risks everything to convince her past-life soul mate in this lifetime that they are meant to be together.

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    Added an answer on August 30, 2012 at 11:59 pm

    Thanks Heather. Yes it is the same soul mate she remembers from all her lives, identifying mark by a unique birthmark. Of course, he doesn't remember her. He has a "girlfriend" and is a playboy who doesn't believe in love. She is engaged to be married in 3 weeks when she "discovers/runs into" him. SRead more

    Thanks Heather. Yes it is the same soul mate she remembers from all her lives, identifying mark by a unique birthmark. Of course, he doesn’t remember her. He has a “girlfriend” and is a playboy who doesn’t believe in love. She is engaged to be married in 3 weeks when she “discovers/runs into” him. She has 3 weeks to convince him that they are meant to be together…and she risks her job, her engagement and in the end, her sanity. It’s a drama. =) But yes, I thought about making her soul mate a woman, or a dirty old man, or something odd, but then it turned into a weird comedy.

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  3. Posted: August 15, 2012In: Public

    Two corrupt ex-cops travel to Coober Pedy with a bag of cash and play chicken with vengeful bikies, thieves, a yakuza wannabe, sociopathic rednecks and a rather short-tempered, one-armed deaf guy.

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    Added an answer on August 30, 2012 at 11:53 pm

    Why? What brings them there. You have enough characters there.. but I am trying to figure out if this is a comedy? Action? I don't know what is at stake.

    Why? What brings them there. You have enough characters there.. but I am trying to figure out if this is a comedy? Action? I don’t know what is at stake.

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