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  1. Posted: October 30, 2023In: Drama

    When a single father attempts to recreate an idyllic childhood for his son through his beloved video game, a spark of rebellion from the boy compels him to face the harsh reality of their generational divide.

    Jake Reeves Penpusher
    Replied to answer on November 6, 2023 at 2:41 pm

    Great question. The story mainly focuses on parents imposing their preferred upbringing on their children, be it through religion, music, sports, or video games. I envision the father reacting by confronting his son, expressing his concern that the son wouldn't have these opportunities without his gRead more

    Great question. The story mainly focuses on parents imposing their preferred upbringing on their children, be it through religion, music, sports, or video games. I envision the father reacting by confronting his son, expressing his concern that the son wouldn’t have these opportunities without his guidance. For instance, parents paying for their kids’ piano lessons. While it’s fine if the child wants to learn, conflicts arise when parents impose their own aspirations, leading to prolonged tension.

    I would like the father to come to the realisation that he doesn’t want a repeat of history, like when his father pushed his own aspirations onto him to play sports. This scenario is a reversal, where the father’s son desires to play sports instead of video games, thus avoiding this consistent generational dissonance.

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  2. Posted: June 16, 2023In: Drama

    When attending a brutal dance audition, a meticulous dancer must break free from conformity, unleashing her authentic individuality to claim the elusive path to success.

    Jake Reeves Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 20, 2023 at 5:17 pm

    Good job Amy! I think all we want to know as readers is how the audition will be brutal. Like physically or mentally? I like that line "unleashing her authentic individuality," it's like showcasing a style of dance within a stylistic story. Well done!

    Good job Amy! I think all we want to know as readers is how the audition will be brutal. Like physically or mentally? I like that line “unleashing her authentic individuality,” it’s like showcasing a style of dance within a stylistic story. Well done!

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  3. Posted: June 16, 2023In: Student Loglines

    When a lonely young girl connects with an online friend who turns out to be the past version of her deceased best friend’s mother, they must collaborate across different time periods to change their intertwined destinies and rewrite a tragic fate.

    Jake Reeves Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 16, 2023 at 3:32 pm

    I like the authenticity of this idea of conversing with the deceased through this line of connection. What is unclear to me is what is their collaboration to change the past? Would it be better to potentially have the best friend and the mother alive now, however the mother converses with the girl tRead more

    I like the authenticity of this idea of conversing with the deceased through this line of connection. What is unclear to me is what is their collaboration to change the past? Would it be better to potentially have the best friend and the mother alive now, however the mother converses with the girl to inform her of their demise and what she needs to do to change their fates.

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