Penpusher
Posted: 2023-06-16T15:47:55+10:00 In:

When attending a brutal dance audition, a meticulous dancer must break free from conformity, unleashing her authentic individuality to claim the elusive path to success.

When attending a brutal dance audition, a meticulous dancer must break free from conformity, unleashing her authentic individuality to claim the elusive path to success.
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    1. Penpusher

      Good job Amy! I think all we want to know as readers is how the audition will be brutal. Like physically or mentally? I like that line “unleashing her authentic individuality,” it’s like showcasing a style of dance within a stylistic story. Well done!

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    2. Singularity

      This sounds more like a scene than a story.

      However, you do have a lead character, a goal, and something standing in the way of the goal so that is a plus!

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