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A bizarre explosion forces a slick counterterrorism agent to confront his beliefs about the universe in order to stop a cult from unleashing ancient gods on the modern world.
While I could see this film piquing my interest, two things stand out to me in the logline: the use of the word "bizarre," and "confront his beliefs about the universe." What is bizarre about the explosion? Would that take too long to explain or could word choice be more succinct? And what about hisRead more
While I could see this film piquing my interest, two things stand out to me in the logline: the use of the word “bizarre,” and “confront his beliefs about the universe.” What is bizarre about the explosion? Would that take too long to explain or could word choice be more succinct? And what about his beliefs needs confronting? Is he baffled? Is it his understanding of reality?
A mysterious explosion forces a slick counterterrorism agent to come face to face with a new reality in order to stop a cult from unleashing ancient gods on the modern world.
Just a tweak, maybe?
See lessA priest kidnaps an atheist writer and tortures him until he believes in God or one of them dies in the process.
"Is it about a fight to the death type thriller, or is it an exploration of people going to extremes and losing sight of reality?" My answer: yes. You hit the nail on the head. There are some existential points, mainly in the throughline, but your review and the logline suggestion are both concise aRead more
“Is it about a fight to the death type thriller, or is it an exploration of people going to extremes and losing sight of reality?”
My answer: yes. You hit the nail on the head. There are some existential points, mainly in the throughline, but your review and the logline suggestion are both concise and, at this point, accurate. I’m completing the third act as we write.
Thanks so much!
See lessA priest kidnaps an atheist writer and tortures him until he believes in God or one of them dies in the process.
It's happening. These reviews (all of them helpful) will keep me honest in my approach to the climax. Thanks so much!
It’s happening. These reviews (all of them helpful) will keep me honest in my approach to the climax.
See lessThanks so much!