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  1. Posted: April 1, 2022In: Thriller

    A priest kidnaps an atheist writer and tortures him until he believes in God or one of them dies in the process.

    JTDallas Penpusher
    Replied to answer on April 13, 2022 at 4:37 am

    I like it. I'm playing with it and will add it to my list of loglines I am considering. Thanks so much!

    I like it. I’m playing with it and will add it to my list of loglines I am considering.

    Thanks so much!

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  2. Posted: April 1, 2022In: Thriller

    A priest kidnaps an atheist writer and tortures him until he believes in God or one of them dies in the process.

    JTDallas Penpusher
    Replied to answer on April 13, 2022 at 4:36 am

    Thank you. The third act is being a pain. I see it in several ways. Now, I'm back to outlining the third act. One of my main concerns is the level of brutality the priest engages in as he drives his plan forward. However, the priest is ultimately concerned with his own doubt and not that of his captRead more

    Thank you.
    The third act is being a pain. I see it in several ways. Now, I’m back to outlining the third act. One of my main concerns is the level of brutality the priest engages in as he drives his plan forward. However, the priest is ultimately concerned with his own doubt and not that of his captive. Thanks again!

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  3. Posted: April 1, 2022In: Thriller

    A priest kidnaps an atheist writer and tortures him until he believes in God or one of them dies in the process.

    JTDallas Penpusher
    Replied to answer on April 13, 2022 at 4:32 am

    This review has really helped me as I write the third act. Possibly, it's caused some writer's block too, but I always work it out. It has helped me to determine, re-determine, my protagonist's role. I usually write dozens of versions of the logline and probably shouldn't have posted the first one oRead more

    This review has really helped me as I write the third act. Possibly, it’s caused some writer’s block too, but I always work it out. It has helped me to determine, re-determine, my protagonist’s role. I usually write dozens of versions of the logline and probably shouldn’t have posted the first one out of the gate. However, had I not, I may not have received this excellent review. Thanks.

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