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A gangster keen to keep street credibility and protect his boss who wants to go legit will do anything including killing the bosses son.
If the gangster from the original logline is a baddy, and the son has most of the screen time, try writing the logline from the son's POV. "Protect his boss" is an open-ended goal. Typically, at the mid point this changes, and a more specific visual end goal is established. Nir asked who the MC is.Read more
If the gangster from the original logline is a baddy, and the son has most of the screen time, try writing the logline from the son’s POV.
“Protect his boss” is an open-ended goal. Typically, at the mid point this changes, and a more specific visual end goal is established.
Nir asked who the MC is. This is probably the most important question before moving to the next version of the logline.
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