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A hardened hitman is haunted by the ghost of one of his targets, an undercover cop, who compels him to hunt down the men who doubled-crossed them both and kidnapped the deceased cop's estranged daughter.
I quite like the idea here, but a lot depends on the tone - I'd hope it doesn't take itself too seriously, but this is quite a 'heavy' logline. I also think 'hunt down' and 'kidnapped' are covering the same ground - the cop basically wants his daughter rescued, so you could maybe tighten it along thRead more
I quite like the idea here, but a lot depends on the tone – I’d hope it doesn’t take itself too seriously, but this is quite a ‘heavy’ logline.
I also think ‘hunt down’ and ‘kidnapped’ are covering the same ground – the cop basically wants his daughter rescued, so you could maybe tighten it along these lines:
“A hardened hitman is haunted by the ghost of one of his targets, an undercover cop, who needs the hitman’s help to rescue his daughter from the men who doubled-crossed them both.”
See lessA scientist builds a satellite system that ends World War III; then must find a way to disable it to prevent another holocaust in the battle of Armageddon.
Hey Swede, My issue here is the disconnect between a system that shuts down wars, and the idea of Armageddon: I don't know if you mean the real Biblical Armageddon (which is implied by the phrase 'battle of'), or WW4 (and why didn't the scientist include an 'off' switch :-) I quite like the idea ofRead more
Hey Swede,
My issue here is the disconnect between a system that shuts down wars, and the idea of Armageddon: I don’t know if you mean the real Biblical Armageddon (which is implied by the phrase ‘battle of’), or WW4 (and why didn’t the scientist include an ‘off’ switch 🙂
I quite like the idea of it being the literal Armageddon – otherwise you have to wonder why what worked for WW3, won’t work again for WW4. So with that said, here’s my reworked version:
“A self aware satellite forces the end of World War III, but the scientist who designed it realizes he must find a way to shut the system down before it triggers the prophecies of the End Times.”
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