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  1. Posted: August 22, 2014In: Public

    Blue collar forty something finds time in his harried day to be a loving husband, caring father, dependable son, mob enforcer, and a violent sadistic killer all while masking his true identity.

    keithrafalko
    Added an answer on August 22, 2014 at 1:01 pm

    I feel this is too long for a logline but throwing it out there. "A violent NYC mafia hitman faces challenges within his own faction as he maintains his daily life of being a loyal loving family man, and all while masking his true identity of a secret CIA agent."

    I feel this is too long for a logline but throwing it out there.

    “A violent NYC mafia hitman faces challenges within his own faction as he maintains his daily life of being a loyal loving family man, and all while masking his true identity of a secret CIA agent.”

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  2. Posted: August 22, 2014In: Public

    Blue collar forty something finds time in his harried day to be a loving husband, caring father, dependable son, mob enforcer, and a violent sadistic killer all while masking his true identity.

    keithrafalko
    Added an answer on August 22, 2014 at 1:01 pm

    I feel this is too long for a logline but throwing it out there. "A violent NYC mafia hitman faces challenges within his own faction as he maintains his daily life of being a loyal loving family man, and all while masking his true identity of a secret CIA agent."

    I feel this is too long for a logline but throwing it out there.

    “A violent NYC mafia hitman faces challenges within his own faction as he maintains his daily life of being a loyal loving family man, and all while masking his true identity of a secret CIA agent.”

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  3. Posted: August 22, 2014In: Public

    Blue collar forty something finds time in his harried day to be a loving husband, caring father, dependable son, mob enforcer, and a violent sadistic killer all while masking his true identity.

    keithrafalko
    Added an answer on August 22, 2014 at 12:51 pm

    All great feedback, thank you! Richiev, his family is aware he is mafia as his father was, they are not aware that he is a sadistic violent hitman though. He has another identity that nobody at all knows about, he is CIA hence masking his true identity. Funny, my partner and I have the entire firstRead more

    All great feedback, thank you! Richiev, his family is aware he is mafia as his father was, they are not aware that he is a sadistic violent hitman though. He has another identity that nobody at all knows about, he is CIA hence masking his true identity. Funny, my partner and I have the entire first season written out, everything including the series bible registered, and ready to have manager and agents roll it out but we somehow are stumped on the logline after a years straight work put in, ha! Go figure

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