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  1. Posted: January 5, 2015In: Public

    Awaiting the arrival of a fugitive, a ruthless bounty hunter holds hostage the patrons of a sleazy bar but soon discovers the imminent arrival of another fugitive: a killer with advanced mental powers from an alternate reality.

    Kimmy Gorden
    Added an answer on January 6, 2015 at 1:12 pm

    "A bounty hunter holds a bar of patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive but when another killer from an alternate dimension shows up instead- the hunter becomes the hunted." I don't even know if that is true- but I got the feeling that is kinda what happens. Removed the part about the mental powRead more

    “A bounty hunter holds a bar of patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive but when another killer from an alternate dimension shows up instead- the hunter becomes the hunted.”

    I don’t even know if that is true- but I got the feeling that is kinda what happens.
    Removed the part about the mental powers because it felt like trying to squeeze too much into one line. I guess you could go with:

    “A bounty hunter holds a bar of patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive but when a super powered killer from an alternate dimension shows up instead- the hunter becomes the hunted.”

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