1. Posted: March 5, 2016In:

    When a tsunami wipes out the island where a villainous pirate?s treasure is buried, he must turn to more conventional methods to fund his retirement.

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    Thanks for the reviews, quite helpful. Richie, I like the version you came up with, I don't think I could improve on it much. I'll keep practicing.

    Thanks for the reviews, quite helpful. Richie, I like the version you came up with, I don’t think I could improve on it much. I’ll keep practicing.

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  2. Posted: March 1, 2016In:

    When a young psychic girl becomes the victim of abuse she must use her ethereal powers to stop the horror and find a path to normality.

    kjennar Logliner

    I agree, this logline is too vague, but I find the concept interesting and hope you post a revised version.

    I agree, this logline is too vague, but I find the concept interesting and hope you post a revised version.

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  3. Posted: March 3, 2016In:

    After discovering his friend has joined the illuminati in order to become a famous rapper, a timid pothead must go undercover as an aspiring actor, in order to infiltrate and disband the secret society, and in doing so learns that in order to defeat the outside forces of the world, he must first defeat his own ego.

    kjennar Logliner

    Agree with the above reviews. My main question was, why does the protag want to stop his friend become a famous rapper and how does posing as an aspiring actor allow him to infiltrate the organisation?

    Agree with the above reviews. My main question was, why does the protag want to stop his friend become a famous rapper and how does posing as an aspiring actor allow him to infiltrate the organisation?

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