1. Posted: March 13, 2018In:

    A smooth talking, but psychologically damaged, criminal with face-blindness rips off a dangerous drug-lord with help from his tough-guy brother. When they are betrayed by their psychopathic accomplice, he must overcome his psychological challenges and track the psychopath through the underground world of experimental hallucinogenic psycho-therapy in order to retrieve the drugs and prevent his brother being murdered.

    Knightrider Mentor

    Hi, there is a lot of information in here and the face blindness doesn't seem to play much into it. How might the blindness play into it or what is the metaphor that the blindness represents.

    Hi, there is a lot of information in here and the face blindness doesn’t seem to play much into it. How might the blindness play into it or what is the metaphor that the blindness represents.

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  2. Posted: March 13, 2018In:

    Amid a sweltering summer, five different souls first encounter adulthood as gentrification alters their community.

    Knightrider Mentor

    Yeah not sure, I get the sense this is a story of a reunion where they need to accept change and the gentrification represents the old being replaced with the new. However in the current state it isn't much of a logline.

    Yeah not sure, I get the sense this is a story of a reunion where they need to accept change and the gentrification represents the old being replaced with the new.
    However in the current state it isn’t much of a logline.

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  3. Posted: March 13, 2018In:

    When his memories of his late family are erased by the corrupt head of a tech company, a memory forger must use his skills to extract intel from a rival firm’s lead scientist to get them back.

    Knightrider Mentor

    I was wondering if I should add in the logline that this is set in a future where employee's thoughts are owned by the corporation they work for, so when you leave work you don't take the information with you that is stored on an artificial hippocampus that you log into when you get to work.

    I was wondering if I should add in the logline that this is set in a future where employee’s thoughts are owned by the corporation they work for, so when you leave work you don’t take the information with you that is stored on an artificial hippocampus that you log into when you get to work.

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