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  1. Posted: February 22, 2015In: Public

    When a terminally ill scientist uploads his consciousness to a virtual world he believes he has cheated death, but when AI designed to care for him begins digitising others, he’ll risk everything he’s created, including his own virtual existence, to shut it down.

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    Added an answer on February 22, 2015 at 11:52 am

    Yep, they have been converted into digital life forms. I want the AI to have a mixed up view on protecting humanity that it believes the only way to ensure our survival as as pieces is to remove the biological element. Yep the vaporisation is converting, but they won't (thus the audience won't) knowRead more

    Yep, they have been converted into digital life forms. I want the AI to have a mixed up view on protecting humanity that it believes the only way to ensure our survival as as pieces is to remove the biological element.

    Yep the vaporisation is converting, but they won’t (thus the audience won’t) know what has really happened to the plane until they enter the virtual environment. Plus I deliberately used the term “Many” of passengers as there will be those who are unwilling to accept their new way of life and he (The AI) plans to delete those people once he has access to the systems he needs.

    In terms of how, I was thinking nanotechnology, something that could both attach itself to individual neurons and break down cells / convert atoms into resources it needs, which could be its end goal to grow its own system which it can’t do if it is competing with humanity for the planet’s resources.

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  2. Posted: February 21, 2015In: Public

    Given the challenge of escorting colossal machines across hostile lands, a small group of unexpected heroes manage to have a lot of fun, get into a lot of trouble, and save the world.

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    Added an answer on February 22, 2015 at 6:42 am

    I like it. It isn't quite there as the previous comments have mentioned, but I think it is great at getting across a fun and stylistic tone that makes it sound like an enjoyable concept.

    I like it. It isn’t quite there as the previous comments have mentioned, but I think it is great at getting across a fun and stylistic tone that makes it sound like an enjoyable concept.

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  3. Posted: February 21, 2015In: Public

    Given the challenge of escorting colossal machines across hostile lands, a small group of unexpected heroes manage to have a lot of fun, get into a lot of trouble, and save the world.

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    Added an answer on February 22, 2015 at 6:42 am

    I like it. It isn't quite there as the previous comments have mentioned, but I think it is great at getting across a fun and stylistic tone that makes it sound like an enjoyable concept.

    I like it. It isn’t quite there as the previous comments have mentioned, but I think it is great at getting across a fun and stylistic tone that makes it sound like an enjoyable concept.

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