1. Posted: February 22, 2015In:

    When a terminally ill scientist uploads his consciousness to a virtual world he believes he has cheated death, but when AI designed to care for him begins digitising others, he’ll risk everything he’s created, including his own virtual existence, to shut it down.

    Knightrider Mentor

    Thanks for the feedback. The criminal angle was because once uploaded you can't comeback, but they don't know that so they think they'll be given freedom upon success of their mission. I'll have a play with the logline and see if can get something a bit more focused.

    Thanks for the feedback. The criminal angle was because once uploaded you can’t comeback, but they don’t know that so they think they’ll be given freedom upon success of their mission.

    I’ll have a play with the logline and see if can get something a bit more focused.

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  2. Posted: February 22, 2015In:

    When a stubborn secret agent wakes up in Eastern Europe trapped in the body of a reclusive female English teacher, the unlikely duo must set their differences aside to find the agent’s body before his former government employers, who want him dead, do.

    Knightrider Mentor

    Thanks for the feedback. I'll look to tweak the logline.

    Thanks for the feedback. I’ll look to tweak the logline.

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  3. Posted: February 22, 2015In:

    When a stubborn secret agent wakes up in Eastern Europe trapped in the body of a reclusive female English teacher, the unlikely duo must set their differences aside to find the agent’s body before his former government employers, who want him dead, do.

    Knightrider Mentor

    Thanks for the feedback. I'll look to tweak the logline.

    Thanks for the feedback. I’ll look to tweak the logline.

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