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  1. Posted: February 22, 2015In: Public

    When a stubborn secret agent wakes up in Eastern Europe trapped in the body of a reclusive female English teacher, the unlikely duo must set their differences aside to find the agent’s body before his former government employers, who want him dead, do.

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    Happy for any help, this was very helpful as didn't really twig the double IC. Trimmed it down, hopefully provided a more active rather than passive by having them have a clear goal that isn't running from somebody.

    Happy for any help, this was very helpful as didn’t really twig the double IC. Trimmed it down, hopefully provided a more active rather than passive by having them have a clear goal that isn’t running from somebody.

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  2. Posted: February 22, 2015In: Public

    When a stubborn secret agent wakes up in Eastern Europe trapped in the body of a reclusive female English teacher, the unlikely duo must set their differences aside to find the agent’s body before his former government employers, who want him dead, do.

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    Added an answer on February 23, 2015 at 3:31 pm

    Happy for any help, this was very helpful as didn't really twig the double IC. Trimmed it down, hopefully provided a more active rather than passive by having them have a clear goal that isn't running from somebody.

    Happy for any help, this was very helpful as didn’t really twig the double IC. Trimmed it down, hopefully provided a more active rather than passive by having them have a clear goal that isn’t running from somebody.

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  3. Posted: February 22, 2015In: Public

    When a terminally ill scientist uploads his consciousness to a virtual world he believes he has cheated death, but when AI designed to care for him begins digitising others, he’ll risk everything he’s created, including his own virtual existence, to shut it down.

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    Added an answer on February 22, 2015 at 3:25 pm

    Thanks for the feedback. The criminal angle was because once uploaded you can't comeback, but they don't know that so they think they'll be given freedom upon success of their mission. I'll have a play with the logline and see if can get something a bit more focused.

    Thanks for the feedback. The criminal angle was because once uploaded you can’t comeback, but they don’t know that so they think they’ll be given freedom upon success of their mission.

    I’ll have a play with the logline and see if can get something a bit more focused.

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