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An interracial family adopts a pair of kids with special powers from an orphanage, and sets out to help each of them find their one remaining parent.
Yep, I am like Nik. I am a little confused on the MC as it seems it could be the parents. Maybe also lacking an antagonist element.is the government after them? Were the parents experimented on and the children were given up as the powers would by passed down? It is almost there and I like the idea,Read more
Yep, I am like Nik. I am a little confused on the MC as it seems it could be the parents. Maybe also lacking an antagonist element.is the government after them? Were the parents experimented on and the children were given up as the powers would by passed down?
It is almost there and I like the idea, but maybe attaching an element like the bourne movie where the one place they can get answers is the one place they can’t return to, which in your case is the government agency that created them.
See lessAn interracial family adopts a pair of kids with special powers from an orphanage, and sets out to help each of them find their one remaining parent.
Yep, I am like Nik. I am a little confused on the MC as it seems it could be the parents. Maybe also lacking an antagonist element.is the government after them? Were the parents experimented on and the children were given up as the powers would by passed down? It is almost there and I like the idea,Read more
Yep, I am like Nik. I am a little confused on the MC as it seems it could be the parents. Maybe also lacking an antagonist element.is the government after them? Were the parents experimented on and the children were given up as the powers would by passed down?
It is almost there and I like the idea, but maybe attaching an element like the bourne movie where the one place they can get answers is the one place they can’t return to, which in your case is the government agency that created them.
See lessWhen a stubborn secret agent wakes up in Eastern Europe trapped in the body of a reclusive female English teacher, the unlikely duo must set their differences aside to find the agent’s body before his former government employers, who want him dead, do.
Yep, it is a great book. I have made some tweaks so hopefully setting is a bit clearer and they appear active. Thanks for your help, I have appreciated yours and everyone else's help
Yep, it is a great book. I have made some tweaks so hopefully setting is a bit clearer and they appear active. Thanks for your help, I have appreciated yours and everyone else’s help
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