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When a desperate scientist uploads his dying wife's consciousness to a computer, he believes he has cheated death, but when she begins uploading others against their will, he'll lead a ragtag team into a virtual world to shut her down.
Valid point, I guess I was trying to get across that he does love his wife and would do anything for her, that his initial act is one of kindness, although may not have been entirely thought it through. However, grieving is something I see this character as having to learn to do throughout the storyRead more
Valid point, I guess I was trying to get across that he does love his wife and would do anything for her, that his initial act is one of kindness, although may not have been entirely thought it through. However, grieving is something I see this character as having to learn to do throughout the story, where perhaps he has been avoiding the fact that his wife is beyond saving because he is either responsible for her fate or just can bare the pain.
See lessI do get your point though so I may work to tweak the character description.
When a desperate scientist uploads his dying wife's consciousness to a computer, he believes he has cheated death, but when she begins uploading others against their will, he'll lead a ragtag team into a virtual world to shut her down.
Valid point, I guess I was trying to get across that he does love his wife and would do anything for her, that his initial act is one of kindness, although may not have been entirely thought it through. However, grieving is something I see this character as having to learn to do throughout the storyRead more
Valid point, I guess I was trying to get across that he does love his wife and would do anything for her, that his initial act is one of kindness, although may not have been entirely thought it through. However, grieving is something I see this character as having to learn to do throughout the story, where perhaps he has been avoiding the fact that his wife is beyond saving because he is either responsible for her fate or just can bare the pain.
See lessI do get your point though so I may work to tweak the character description.
Based on true events. ?When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up in Nazi death camp Treblinka, they must convince the cruel camp commandant to spare their lives.”
I get almost a 'Saw' type vibe of this, but also a possible story about regret and redemption as maybe the pilot saw what was happening back then, maybe even had a chance to save lives, but froze or in one moment failed to do the right thing, so his current gallantry manner actually hides a past hauRead more
I get almost a ‘Saw’ type vibe of this, but also a possible story about regret and redemption as maybe the pilot saw what was happening back then, maybe even had a chance to save lives, but froze or in one moment failed to do the right thing, so his current gallantry manner actually hides a past haunted by one perhaps cowardly act, so maybe he was lured there… Could be a story about revenge.
I see a lot of directions with this. My only nitpick: Must Beg might make the characters seem passive or reactionary, but that’s just a possible thought.
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