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  1. Posted: May 23, 2013In: Public

    A man faces an unimaginable crisis when he discovers his new girlfriend –the daughter of a Voodoo queen– is a zombie.

    Koen T
    Added an answer on May 25, 2013 at 4:05 am

    I think a pitchline is meant for selling. A logline is (as I thought) the backbone of your story serving as a development tool, making sure you have the right focus while working on the project.

    I think a pitchline is meant for selling. A logline is (as I thought) the backbone of your story serving as a development tool, making sure you have the right focus while working on the project.

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  2. Posted: May 15, 2013In: Public

    "A reckless cop suspects his clean cut partner is actually an off duty vigilante. Upon investigation he discovers his partner is part of a bigger conspiracy and question his own morales by bringing his partner to justice"

    Koen T
    Added an answer on May 15, 2013 at 3:40 pm

    About the content: It is teasing indeed. I like the idea that the 'perfect' partner turns out to be the villain. But at this point all your protagonist does is realizing the world isn't what he thought it was. You haven't left the first act yet. What does the protagonist do about it? And why is thatRead more

    About the content: It is teasing indeed. I like the idea that the ‘perfect’ partner turns out to be the villain. But at this point all your protagonist does is realizing the world isn’t what he thought it was. You haven’t left the first act yet. What does the protagonist do about it? And why is that difficult for him?

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  3. Posted: May 15, 2013In: Public

    "A reckless cop suspects his clean cut partner is actually an off duty vigilante. Upon investigation he discovers his partner is part of a bigger conspiracy and question his own morales by bringing his partner to justice"

    Koen T
    Added an answer on May 15, 2013 at 3:32 pm

    Hi Michael, it 's difficult to write a short log line. Mine are always to long too. But a logline should be short. Grabbing the attention without giving the story away: pitch line. The core of the story: log line.

    Hi Michael, it ‘s difficult to write a short log line. Mine are always to long too. But a logline should be short. Grabbing the attention without giving the story away: pitch line. The core of the story: log line.

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