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Two men hunt the rogue crocodile that killed both their wives. One wants to save it, the other wants it dead!
I first wrote tale in novel form more years back than I care to remember. The thing is, it is set in Australia. Here in oz the croc is a protected species and is more likely to be relocated than killed in the event of an attack.The theme seemed to work well enough in the novel but in trying to turnRead more
I first wrote tale in novel form more years back than I care to remember. The thing is, it is set in Australia. Here in oz the croc is a protected species and is more likely to be relocated than killed in the event of an attack.The theme seemed to work well enough in the novel but in trying to turn it into a movie, I must admit I have been struggling. Now here you go and slap me over the back of the head with the friggin obvious.
See lessI recently asked a producer what to do when the antagonist appears to be taking over the story, his reply was “Interesting question, why don’t you put it up in a forum.”
Now I’m thinking that I have been so stuck on the original story that I couldn’t see the forest for the trees.
Another draft here I come.
Thanks (i think)
Two men hunt the rogue crocodile that killed both their wives. One wants to save it, the other wants it dead!
Thanks for the replies guys and thanks to Karel for setting this up,it is proving to be very helpful. Patrockable - I've taken onboard your suggestions and thought I'd give it another try. Sam promised his dying wife not to have the crocodile that took her life killed. The monster has escaped from hRead more
Thanks for the replies guys and thanks to Karel for setting this up,it is proving to be very helpful.
Patrockable – I’ve taken onboard your suggestions and thought I’d give it another try.
Sam promised his dying wife not to have the crocodile that took her life killed. The monster has escaped from his Wildlife Park and killed again. To honour his promise he must locate the beast before the vengeful husband of it’s latest victim exacts his revenge.
Hmmm what do you think? Too much?
See lessTwo men hunt the rogue crocodile that killed both their wives. One wants to save it, the other wants it dead!
Lol I actually had internal conflict over the use of "rogue" mainly because the media like to describe all attacks by critters on humans that way. On the same token aren't all movie critter villains monstrous - I thought that might have been a given. - True slaughter sounds better than just dead. InRead more
Lol I actually had internal conflict over the use of “rogue” mainly because the media like to describe all attacks by critters on humans that way. On the same token aren’t all movie critter villains monstrous – I thought that might have been a given. – True slaughter sounds better than just dead. Interestingly you picked up on two sub-plots ie escape and activist. Thanks for the input much appreciated.
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