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  1. Posted: February 6, 2020In: Coming of Age

    When his big brother goes missing in the wilderness, an anxious high-school senior heads into the wild to find him? accompanied by his brother?s ghost

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    Added an answer on March 12, 2020 at 4:00 pm

    We could just remove the details of the ghost.   When his brother is goes missing in the wild, an over anxious high schooler teams up with a ghost to find him before it's too late.

    We could just remove the details of the ghost.

     

    When his brother is goes missing in the wild, an over anxious high schooler teams up with a ghost to find him before it’s too late.

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  2. Posted: December 28, 2019In: Crime

    A crisis manager by day and citizen journalist by night is recruited by a vigilante mob to expose the corporation he is paid to protect.

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    Added an answer on December 30, 2019 at 11:48 am

    A journalist follows a lead from a credible source that claims his father?s corporation has been illegally erasing people?s memories.   So does this imply that by bringing down the corporation, he will lose everything as well? Does he not want to get his father in trouble? Is this the dilemma -Read more

    A journalist follows a lead from a credible source that claims his father?s corporation has been illegally erasing people?s memories.

     

    So does this imply that by bringing down the corporation, he will lose everything as well? Does he not want to get his father in trouble? Is this the dilemma – dilemmas always make it stronger which was a good diea.

    I also think that source has to have value for this journalist to listen to them. Are they the mother/partner/ disgruntled ex-employee trying to get revenge /resolution /answers?? I think there has to be an incident – a death, a disappearance, something that prompts someone to seek help to get answers or bring down the company? Why this journalist? Do they know it’s the sone of corporation owner?

     

    Somet thoughts to add to the detailed assistance above.

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  3. Posted: December 30, 2019In: Drama

    A homeless man combating substance abuse dedicates his battle with HIV to his brother who allegedly died in the Iraq war. His efforts are guided and nourished by the unrivaled generosity of a female passerby who seeks to help him out from week to week — but as time grows and grows, so does his reliance on her.

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    Added an answer on December 30, 2019 at 11:02 am

    How about: After the death of his brother, a homeless man fights against his own substance abuse and failing health before it's too late.

    How about:

    After the death of his brother, a homeless man fights against his own substance abuse and failing health before it’s too late.

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