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  1. Posted: August 26, 2019In: Coming of Age, Examples

    When a talented teenage pianist wins a scholarship to Julliard, he must convince his parents, outlaw militant radicals, to let him come out of hiding and join the normal world.

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    Added an answer on October 6, 2019 at 10:29 am

    So how did he learn piano and how did he audition? Do they just live an isolated life or in a bunker? i like the contrast in worlds though question how they've worked so far. Does he go to school or home schooled? What does he know of the world? How does he even learn piano? Does he live in a camp?Read more

    So how did he learn piano and how did he audition? Do they just live an isolated life or in a bunker? i like the contrast in worlds though question how they’ve worked so far. Does he go to school or home schooled? What does he know of the world? How does he even learn piano? Does he live in a camp? You got my attention and like the contrast but not sure how it interweaves today for it to change….

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  2. Posted: October 5, 2019In: Family

    In order to progress through heaven’s gates,? ghosts must pay penance by returning to earth and helping the people they hurt.

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    Added an answer on October 6, 2019 at 10:05 am

    I was actually thinking more family-like? /tween level. Like bullies going back to help the kids of the people they bullied? by going back to high school. The idea was to empathetic by being forcing them to be like the victim. I left it generic because I was thinking different people and different 'Read more

    I was actually thinking more family-like? /tween level. Like bullies going back to help the kids of the people they bullied? by going back to high school. The idea was to empathetic by being forcing them to be like the victim. I left it generic because I was thinking different people and different ‘cases’ for a TV series, not a movie.? But was definitely thinking younger audience, light dramedy with meaning.? So can look at different specific exampales and that should help create the tone.

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  3. Posted: August 15, 2019In: Historical

    After an 18 year-old Russian Jew sends his family to Ellis Island but must remain behind because of the 1924 U.S. immigration quota law, his 5-year journey in Europe and Latin America forces him to come of age and finally dare to cross illegally in El Paso, TX to reunite with his family.

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    Added an answer on October 5, 2019 at 9:22 am

    I guess the focus is on this young man who had to find a way to join his family, with no resources, at a time where Jews were not widely accepted? alone?? It sounds like a great story but I guess we focus on the obstacles a) no resources and alone b) Impact of being a Russian Jew - does that presentRead more

    I guess the focus is on this young man who had to find a way to join his family, with no resources, at a time where Jews were not widely accepted? alone?? It sounds like a great story but I guess we focus on the obstacles

    a) no resources and alone

    b) Impact of being a Russian Jew – does that present a problem travelling around Europe? how are the Russians or Jews viewed at that time?

    c) way to travel – how is he getting around? does he have any skills or education? Speak another language?

    d) what would happen when he arrives in the US

    Always love a good immigrant story….I think we need to know more about the protagonist – I don’t think it’s as important as to why he is separate from his family, but more about his quest to find them in the US.

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