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  1. Posted: April 23, 2019In: Family

    After eviction, a desperate widow departs with her step-kids to seek her ultra-rich ascetic brother, meditating somewhere in the woods of India before [the ticking clock event]

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    Added an answer on October 5, 2019 at 8:48 am

    Sounds interesting but how does someone so poor find someone in another country?? I like the idea of the quest but I guess determining what that reason is will probably help with the ticking clock event. How old are the kids and are they vested in the journey - or is she just dragging them along.. WRead more

    Sounds interesting but how does someone so poor find someone in another country?? I like the idea of the quest but I guess determining what that reason is will probably help with the ticking clock event. How old are the kids and are they vested in the journey – or is she just dragging them along.. Would be good if they had a combined or different reasons for the journey.? Maybe they’re not evicted but struggling. So they have some resources but not enough to….and is there something they need besides money that only he can provide?

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  2. Posted: June 12, 2019In: Drama

    After a minor brain injury, a cynical young woman learns she recently made the decision to come forward about a crime from her past; but, unsure if she is up to the task, she must work to find out who she spent the last two years becoming and whether the shoe still fits.

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    Added an answer on June 12, 2019 at 11:56 am

    So would it be safe to assume she's lost her memory and doesn't know what happened in the last 2 years? Does she return to the home she once had to find she's evicted. Does she call family and realise she's not talking to any of them? I started thinking Suddenly 30 - she"grows up" overnight to realiRead more

    So would it be safe to assume she’s lost her memory and doesn’t know what happened in the last 2 years? Does she return to the home she once had to find she’s evicted. Does she call family and realise she’s not talking to any of them?

    I started thinking Suddenly 30 – she”grows up” overnight to realise she got everything she thought she wanted but found out she was a terrible person and had hurt everyone she cared about.

     

    but good point above – is it to remember what happened over the last 2 years, to change who she had become? to solve another puzzle?

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  3. Posted: November 10, 2018In: Coming of Age

    In an anthromorpic world, a young lion cub Living in his father shadow, decides to create the world?s first diverse sports team. Determined to prove themselves, these outcasts battle against convention and use their differences as strength in a futuristic sport.

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    Added an answer on June 12, 2019 at 11:46 am

    In an anthropomorphic world, a young lion cub, legally forbidden to play <<sport>>??? ?must create a team of other outcast players to prove to his <<sport>> hero father and the government? that cubs deserve to be included. Just a suggestion to let us know why can't he play noRead more

    In an anthropomorphic world, a young lion cub, legally forbidden to play <<sport>>??? ?must create a team of other outcast players to prove to his <<sport>> hero father and the government? that cubs deserve to be included.

    Just a suggestion to let us know

    why can’t he play now? – incapable, forbidden,

    Why does he create a team of outcasts? – Are all cubs forbidden or anyone non-human?

    Why is he doing it? To fight for his right to play?

     

    Just some ideas.

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