1. Posted: August 26, 2015In:

    After offering a kidney to her sister they discover they were both adopted. They go on a search for family and a kidney based only on their Mum’s old diary.PS Adoptive parents are dead, can’t see how to fit that in.

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    Switch it. A dead Kidney donor is found to be an exact match for her recipient, meaning they were twins. The recipient must go on a detective hunt to find out how and why they were separated, and the search leads her across continents and through some of the twentieth century's most tragic history.

    Switch it. A dead Kidney donor is found to be an exact match for her recipient, meaning they were twins. The recipient must go on a detective hunt to find out how and why they were separated, and the search leads her across continents and through some of the twentieth century’s most tragic history.

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  2. Posted: August 12, 2016In:

    A repentant terrorist decided to erase his memory and start over new life, but soon he was chased by his past

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    try something like: When a child soldier forced to do terrorist acts kills his own cousin and tries to reform his life, he soon finds the cousin's family are still out for revenge

    try something like: When a child soldier forced to do terrorist acts kills his own cousin and tries to reform his life, he soon finds the cousin’s family are still out for revenge

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  3. Posted: August 24, 2015In:

    Two narcissistic TV presenters host televised death in a darkly comic indictment of infotainment

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    And..? This is not a logline. Try WHEN (something happens) a FLAWED CHARACTER (your hero) must ACT IN A SPECIFIC WAY (do something) to CHANGE THINGS.

    And..? This is not a logline. Try WHEN (something happens) a FLAWED CHARACTER (your hero) must ACT IN A SPECIFIC WAY (do something) to CHANGE THINGS.

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