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When his mother dies in his arms, an insomniac paramedic abandons the scene of the car accident that claimed her to wander the city streets in search of his estranged siblings.
This is confusing to me, it sounds like this man leaves his dead mother and then just wanders aimlessly through the streets hoping to bump into estranged siblings. If that is not the story maybe try using the word after instead of when to separate the events with time.
This is confusing to me, it sounds like this man leaves his dead mother and then just wanders aimlessly through the streets hoping to bump into estranged siblings. If that is not the story maybe try using the word after instead of when to separate the events with time.
See lessRunning away from domestic violence in 1920s Oklahoma, a teenager encounters homelessness, alcoholism and drug addiction. Sent to prison, then declared insane, an encounter with a book changes his life
Maybe there is a descriptor that can be used to cover "homelessness, alcoholism and drug addiction" so that you don't have a laundry list, so to speak,? within your logline.
Maybe there is a descriptor that can be used to cover “homelessness, alcoholism and drug addiction” so that you don’t have a laundry list, so to speak,? within your logline.
See lessA lonely man in witness protection receives word that his estranged father is dying, and so he must travel back to his home state without being detected by those who want him dead, in order to say goodbye before his father?s time is up.
An intricate concept,? sounds like a series of increasingly troubling events but what is the climax. His father is dying, he's trying to stay hidden and... This logline seems to be missing something in my opinion.
An intricate concept,? sounds like a series of increasingly troubling events but what is the climax. His father is dying, he’s trying to stay hidden and… This logline seems to be missing something in my opinion.
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