1. Posted: September 17, 2012In:

    In a past life Raymond Red believed in reincarnation. But in the life he is living now, being reborn is not part of the program.

    Laughterror

    I read that part of his comment and thought "Wow". not because it didn't sound nice but it made me think...'How many times did I watch a movie that I didn't want to watch' especially when you don't find out untill the end. WoW ! appreciate your taking the time to read and write. I guess I'm in the wRead more

    I read that part of his comment and thought “Wow”. not because it didn’t sound nice but it made me think…’How many times did I watch a movie that I didn’t want to watch’ especially when you don’t find out untill the end. WoW !
    appreciate your taking the time to read and write. I guess I’m in the woods with this.
    I’m afraid to reveal too much and would need to cross paths with someone who’s imagination was armed to the teeth.

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  2. Posted: September 17, 2012In:

    In a past life Raymond Red believed in reincarnation. But in the life he is living now, being reborn is not part of the program.

    Laughterror

    your right, i'll agree, according to industry, standrds n' practice, in the quest for funding, the last thing $ or marketing want to do is have to think. but my logline was with a tv guide in mind, or a cable channel description for a viewer to read. maybe posting it on this site was my mistake. butRead more

    your right, i’ll agree, according to industry, standrds n’ practice, in the quest for funding, the last thing $ or marketing want to do is have to think. but my logline was with a tv guide in mind, or a cable channel description for a viewer to read. maybe posting it on this site was my mistake. but some type of reaction and input was needed. I think reading it would intrest a viewer, in a best part of the film is what you don’t know kind of way.

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  3. Posted: September 17, 2012In:

    After he is taken to a frightening dystopian future resulting directly from his work, a disillusioned software developer returns to the present, intent on putting an end to his firm's nefarious plans.

    Laughterror

    isn't describing dystopia as frightening like saying a black crow? the reader goes from the present to the future and then back to the present just in the description. Then does it all again when viewing the film. Is the itinerary neccesery? Keep the travel plans a mystery. Describe why hes frightenRead more

    isn’t describing dystopia as frightening like saying a black crow? the reader goes from the present to the future and then back to the present just in the description. Then does it all again when viewing the film. Is the itinerary neccesery? Keep the travel plans a mystery. Describe why hes frightened.{ maybe even descibing a software developer as dissillusioned falls under the black crow(lol)Thought i’d end with some humor.}

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