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  1. Posted: October 21, 2014In: Public

    When a cattle drover losses the bonus his family was counting on to survive, he turns to bounty hunting War Criminals in a Post-apocolyptic Australian Outback.

    lewisricekrispy Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 22, 2014 at 5:42 pm

    Thanks for the input. I envisage this to be a wild west type of world, but set in Australia, because of it's vastness. With out giving to much away, the story is set twenty or so years after a number of events led to the creation of this world. Comunities have been established, and famine is widesprRead more

    Thanks for the input.

    I envisage this to be a wild west type of world, but set in Australia, because of it’s vastness. With out giving to much away, the story is set twenty or so years after a number of events led to the creation of this world. Comunities have been established, and famine is widespread. Transporting supplies, and in this case, cattle, is big business (but comes with risk). I never specified what the bonus would be, could be traded goods, paying off debts etc. Even in the future, business is business.
    The war criminals that they are tracking will be those responsiable for the canabalisms, rapes and many other crimes which were carried out during the past twenty years.
    As a ticking clock, I’ve made it that in order for them to move on, Justice must be applied for and then served before a set time (as it becomes invalid).
    The hero has been sheltered by his father from this brutal world, so killing isn’t in his nature. To him, cattle droving is a means to an end.
    Regarding the antagonist, I’m not sure weather i’ll put him in the logline, but i’ll defenantly build a better one.

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  2. Posted: October 21, 2014In: Public

    When a cattle drover losses the bonus his family was counting on to survive, he turns to bounty hunting War Criminals in a Post-apocolyptic Australian Outback.

    lewisricekrispy Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 22, 2014 at 5:42 pm

    Thanks for the input. I envisage this to be a wild west type of world, but set in Australia, because of it's vastness. With out giving to much away, the story is set twenty or so years after a number of events led to the creation of this world. Comunities have been established, and famine is widesprRead more

    Thanks for the input.

    I envisage this to be a wild west type of world, but set in Australia, because of it’s vastness. With out giving to much away, the story is set twenty or so years after a number of events led to the creation of this world. Comunities have been established, and famine is widespread. Transporting supplies, and in this case, cattle, is big business (but comes with risk). I never specified what the bonus would be, could be traded goods, paying off debts etc. Even in the future, business is business.
    The war criminals that they are tracking will be those responsiable for the canabalisms, rapes and many other crimes which were carried out during the past twenty years.
    As a ticking clock, I’ve made it that in order for them to move on, Justice must be applied for and then served before a set time (as it becomes invalid).
    The hero has been sheltered by his father from this brutal world, so killing isn’t in his nature. To him, cattle droving is a means to an end.
    Regarding the antagonist, I’m not sure weather i’ll put him in the logline, but i’ll defenantly build a better one.

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  3. Posted: October 21, 2014In: Public

    When a cattle drover losses the bonus his family was counting on to survive, he turns to bounty hunting War Criminals in a Post-apocolyptic Australian Outback.

    lewisricekrispy Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 21, 2014 at 6:48 pm

    How about when a teenage cattle drover loses both his father and the bonus that his starving family were counting on to survive, he joins forces with an ageing gun-slinger, competing for the last availible bounties from capturing war criminals in post-apcolyptic Australia.

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    when a teenage cattle drover loses both his father and the bonus that his starving family were counting on to survive, he joins forces with an ageing gun-slinger, competing for the last availible bounties from capturing war criminals in post-apcolyptic Australia.

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