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  1. Posted: August 2, 2014In: Public

    Evan was once heralded as a front page success story for his popular smartphone game, ?Cat Pipe?. But ten years later, he finds himself living in unemployed obscurity with his slacker best friend and ?artist? in residence, Andy. What goes up must come down. Way down.

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    Added an answer on August 2, 2014 at 10:02 pm

    What is the story? His descent, his rise back into the lime light, or just him getting by? Also you could probably shorten the first 28 words down to less than 10 "A broke, former millionare phone app designer..."

    What is the story? His descent, his rise back into the lime light, or just him getting by?
    Also you could probably shorten the first 28 words down to less than 10 “A broke, former millionare phone app designer…”

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  2. Posted: August 2, 2014In: Public

    Evan was once heralded as a front page success story for his popular smartphone game, ?Cat Pipe?. But ten years later, he finds himself living in unemployed obscurity with his slacker best friend and ?artist? in residence, Andy. What goes up must come down. Way down.

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    Added an answer on August 2, 2014 at 10:02 pm

    What is the story? His descent, his rise back into the lime light, or just him getting by? Also you could probably shorten the first 28 words down to less than 10 "A broke, former millionare phone app designer..."

    What is the story? His descent, his rise back into the lime light, or just him getting by?
    Also you could probably shorten the first 28 words down to less than 10 “A broke, former millionare phone app designer…”

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  3. Posted: July 31, 2014In: Public

    When the Lunar Reactor core goes haywire , Commander White must find a way to save the crew before they get literally cooked alive.

    lewisricekrispy Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 31, 2014 at 10:10 pm

    I think you need to include a location such as space ship or planet.

    I think you need to include a location such as space ship or planet.

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