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An interracial family adopts a pair of kids with special powers from an orphanage, and sets out to help each of them find their one remaining parent.
Well the main characters are the two adopted kids. They were experimented on in the orphanage by a rogue government organization which resulted in them getting powers. The rogue org got found out and shut down. The kids got adopted the same day as the shut down and were informed by the government thRead more
Well the main characters are the two adopted kids. They were experimented on in the orphanage by a rogue government organization which resulted in them getting powers. The rogue org got found out and shut down. The kids got adopted the same day as the shut down and were informed by the government that they each had one remaining parent alive. Agents of the rogue org are hunting them down, while they search for their parents with their new family and learn how to use their powers.
I was trying to hone it down though.
See lessAn honorable Mossad assassin must kill his illegitimate daughter, Miss Palestine, before she blows herself up, while advocating global hate at an Israeli-Palestinian peace summit.
Why is him being illiterate relevant to the logline? I believe you were going for a touch of irony. It's there, but I'd rework the first half to make it more pronounced and clear.
Why is him being illiterate relevant to the logline? I believe you were going for a touch of irony. It’s there, but I’d rework the first half to make it more pronounced and clear.
See lessAn honorable Mossad assassin must kill his illegitimate daughter, Miss Palestine, before she blows herself up, while advocating global hate at an Israeli-Palestinian peace summit.
Why is him being illiterate relevant to the logline? I believe you were going for a touch of irony. It's there, but I'd rework the first half to make it more pronounced and clear.
Why is him being illiterate relevant to the logline? I believe you were going for a touch of irony. It’s there, but I’d rework the first half to make it more pronounced and clear.
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