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After his wife gives birth to a stillborn, a wizard has three days to enlist the help of the state?s only necromancer to resurrect his daughter and break a generational curse that will kill all the female children born into the family.
Creative spaces ?are indeed the way to go. Thank you all creatives for your reviews, you have helped tremendously. ?After your last notes I had to make some serious adjustments to the screenplay which by the way I have completed. I heard about this website after I wrote my screenplay ?which became eRead more
Creative spaces ?are indeed the way to go. Thank you all creatives for your reviews, you have helped tremendously. ?After your last notes I had to make some serious adjustments to the screenplay which by the way I have completed. I heard about this website after I wrote my screenplay ?which became even more helpful because your notes to the logline helped me improve the screenplay. I am glad you ?love this latest version and I will be sure to make the necessary changes and cut down on words like you suggested. thank you tons again.
See lessAfter famous NASCAR racer dies, his son, an up-and-coming auto racer falls into alcoholism. With sponsors pulling their support and his money dwindling, friends and family try to help the son overcome his depression in time for his next race.
Agreed with the points above. The son is supposed to be a protagonist but his friend and families are the ones who are active. What does he want? What is his objective goal? Once you have identified these, the friends and family would not need to be part of the logline anymore. Son has to have agencRead more
Agreed with the points above.
See lessThe son is supposed to be a protagonist but his friend and families are the ones who are active. What does he want? What is his objective goal? Once you have identified these, the friends and family would not need to be part of the logline anymore. Son has to have agency.
When hunting season nears for the 20th time in his career, a miserable assassin enrolls in his pregnant wife?s yoga and pilates class to rediscover a desire to kill.
I think this would be an interesting movie to watch. I quite like it. However, I can't quite understand the first part of the logline, has he not been able to kill all along in the previous seasons that he has to rediscover the desire? Because that is how it sounds to me. Or is he desperate becauseRead more
I think this would be an interesting movie to watch. I quite like it.
See lessHowever, I can’t quite understand the first part of the logline, has he not been able to kill all along in the previous seasons that he has to rediscover the desire? Because that is how it sounds to me. Or is he desperate because for this season the desire is just not coming? Does the pregnancy play any part in this journey in a more antagonistic way? because if not maybe you should remove it. The objective goal though is very clear and works.