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  1. Posted: December 14, 2015In: Drama

    After the Grim Reaper has guided countless people to the Afterlife, a suitable replacement must don the cowl, so Death can finally rest in peace.

    Lucius Paisley Logliner
    Added an answer on December 19, 2015 at 8:22 pm

    If you get stuck, I suggest looking into Terry Pratchett's Reaper Man as?another approach.

    If you get stuck, I suggest looking into Terry Pratchett’s Reaper Man as?another approach.

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  2. Posted: September 11, 2015In: Public

    To solve the puzzle of her family disappearance, a fraud investigator must find out the truth about her father who masterminded an international criminal heist

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    Added an answer on September 13, 2015 at 9:04 pm

    I don't know if anybody has said this, but the biggest 'elephant' in your logline is your insistence in including the location. Take it out, it's not important to the story at all. And stretching it out to 'fit together the pieces blah blah blah' just say 'solve the puzzle', there is no Oscar categoRead more

    I don’t know if anybody has said this, but the biggest ‘elephant’ in your logline is your insistence in including the location. Take it out, it’s not important to the story at all.

    And stretching it out to ‘fit together the pieces blah blah blah’ just say ‘solve the puzzle’, there is no Oscar category for best convolution in a logline.

    ‘To find out the truth about her father, a fraud investigator must solve the puzzle behind an international criminal heist’ or some such.

    More thriller, less filler…

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  3. Posted: September 11, 2015In: Public

    To solve the puzzle of her family disappearance, a fraud investigator must find out the truth about her father who masterminded an international criminal heist

    Lucius Paisley Logliner
    Added an answer on September 13, 2015 at 9:02 pm

    I don't know if anybody has said this, but the biggest 'elephant' in your logline is your insistence in including the location. Take it out, it's not important to the story at all. And stretching it out to 'fit together the pieces blah blah blah' just say 'solve the puzzle', there is no Oscar categoRead more

    I don’t know if anybody has said this, but the biggest ‘elephant’ in your logline is your insistence in including the location. Take it out, it’s not important to the story at all.

    And stretching it out to ‘fit together the pieces blah blah blah’ just say ‘solve the puzzle’, there is no Oscar category for best convolution in a logline.

    ‘To find out the truth about her father, a fr

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