1. Posted: February 1, 2015In:

    When slobby Jim and well-groomed Leo move into student housing together, their initial personality clash evolves into an unlikely friendship as they share the triumphs and humiliations of life in Sydney.

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    "Knowing nothing about your series..." Never seen The Odd Couple, then?

    “Knowing nothing about your series…”

    Never seen The Odd Couple, then?

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  2. Posted: February 6, 2015In:

    Veil of a Dream is a character-driven drama about an emotionally unstable teenager who must battle the torment of his manipulative friends, his scarred past, and his own haunted mind as he pursues a desire for love.

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    This isn't a logline, this is a review blurb for the back of a DVD cover. Remember the simple guideline - when (inciting incident), (main character) must (perform task) and/to (achieve goal). The same goes for your previous effort...

    This isn’t a logline, this is a review blurb for the back of a DVD cover.

    Remember the simple guideline – when (inciting incident), (main character) must (perform task) and/to (achieve goal).

    The same goes for your previous effort…

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  3. Posted: February 6, 2015In:

    Veil of a Dream is a character-driven drama about an emotionally unstable teenager who must battle the torment of his manipulative friends, his scarred past, and his own haunted mind as he pursues a desire for love.

    Lucius Paisley Logliner

    This isn't a logline, this is a review blurb for the back of a DVD cover. Remember the simple guideline - when (inciting incident), (main character) must (perform task) and/to (achieve goal). The same goes for your previous effort...

    This isn’t a logline, this is a review blurb for the back of a DVD cover.

    Remember the simple guideline – when (inciting incident), (main character) must (perform task) and/to (achieve goal).

    The same goes for your previous effort…

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