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A Financial Analyst working for 20 years finds herself in a peculiar situation after a one-night stand she won?t forget. Elise finds herself in love with Joe who is a laidback skater who , as carefree and the complete opposite of thw workaholic Elise, is now finding out that love is harder as a couple living together. The challanges at new love, the challanges of a new life in a new relationship now has a surprise. A baby on the way, this forces Elise choose between work and family life. To get time for both she decides to bring her baby with her to work at Wallstreet!
Lose everything before "... choose between work and family life."?That's all garbage. Essentially, you need ONE inciting incident. Then you're going to get something like: When a workaholic Financial Analyst falls?pregnant after their?one night stand, her boss gives her an ultimatum,?keep the?baby oRead more
Lose everything before “… choose between work and family life.”?That’s all garbage.
Essentially, you need ONE inciting incident.
Then you’re going to get something like:
When a workaholic Financial Analyst falls?pregnant after their?one night stand, her boss gives her an ultimatum,?keep the?baby or keep?her?dream job on Wall Street.
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A reverse Breaking Bad? Interesting.
A reverse Breaking Bad? Interesting.
See lessA cold and withdrawn assassin, who uses her apocalyptic visions of the future to hunt targets in the present before they become a threat, finds herself hunted by a deadly, yet emotionally unstable, foe, and, in her bid to survive, she uncovers a future she never could have foreseen.
Psychic assassin would do. "in the present" is unnecessary. ?Since it's an enemy, the assumption would be they mean to do the hero harm, so "deadly" is unnecessary. "uncovers a future she never could have foreseen" is too wordy and belongs more on a movie poster than as part of a logline. Without knRead more
Psychic assassin would do. “in the present” is unnecessary. ?Since it’s an enemy, the assumption would be they mean to do the hero harm, so “deadly” is unnecessary. “uncovers a future she never could have foreseen” is too wordy and belongs more on a movie poster than as part of a logline.
Without knowing what you story actually is, there’s not much else I can offer as suggestions.
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