1. Posted: October 2, 2015In:

    a delusional and conniving narcissist manipulates an introverted millionaire, that’s undergoing a crisis, to room with him and his workaholic best friend to fund his ideas on becoming the next Elon Musk.

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    Is this meant to be an attempt at the logline for Silicon Valley?

    Is this meant to be an attempt at the logline for Silicon Valley?

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  2. Posted: September 17, 2015In:

    a terminally ill man sets out to take revenge on people from his past. But to his frustration they are dying before he can get to them.

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    To take revenge on those responsible for his illness, a dying man must find a cure before they all die from the same thing.Maybe?

    To take revenge on those responsible for his illness, a dying man must find a cure before they all die from the same thing.

    Maybe?

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  3. Posted: September 13, 2015In:

    A retired father and his daughter must forgive previous tensions to work together to prevent his other daughters from selling the family business.

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    "So many structures are based on the bards work." The structures in the majority of Shakespeare were already considered old by the time he got around to using them. And you mean Hamlet...

    “So many structures are based on the bards work.”

    The structures in the majority of Shakespeare were already considered old by the time he got around to using them.

    And you mean Hamlet…

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