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  1. Posted: December 10, 2014In: Public

    Responsible for the death of his son, a father tries to explain his actions leading up to the tragedy before taking his own life.

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    Added an answer on December 11, 2014 at 9:49 pm

    It's only meant to be a short piece, which is why I'm trying to imply that it's about the dialogue and not the actions themselves - a soliloquy of sorts, but with something different - not a "twist". I guess his obstacle is himself / his own doubt, which will be revealed in the conversation. I'm hopRead more

    It’s only meant to be a short piece, which is why I’m trying to imply that it’s about the dialogue and not the actions themselves – a soliloquy of sorts, but with something different – not a “twist”.

    I guess his obstacle is himself / his own doubt, which will be revealed in the conversation.

    I’m hoping a lack of a clear obstacle, apart from taking place on top of a building, will force an audience to pay attention to the dialogue.

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  2. Posted: December 10, 2014In: Public

    Responsible for the death of his son, a father tries to explain his actions leading up to the tragedy before taking his own life.

    Lucius Paisley Logliner
    Added an answer on December 11, 2014 at 9:49 pm

    It's only meant to be a short piece, which is why I'm trying to imply that it's about the dialogue and not the actions themselves - a soliloquy of sorts, but with something different - not a "twist". I guess his obstacle is himself / his own doubt, which will be revealed in the conversation. I'm hopRead more

    It’s only meant to be a short piece, which is why I’m trying to imply that it’s about the dialogue and not the actions themselves – a soliloquy of sorts, but with something different – not a “twist”.

    I guess his obstacle is himself / his own doubt, which will be revealed in the conversation.

    I’m hoping a lack of a clear obstacle, apart from taking place on top of a building, will force an audience to pay attention to the dialogue.

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  3. Posted: December 10, 2014In: Public

    Responsible for the death of his son, a father tries to explain his actions leading up to the tragedy before taking his own life.

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    Added an answer on December 11, 2014 at 9:44 pm

    RichieV - I'm not too thrilled with it either, I just wanted to get it all "out there". He's recounting his story to the ghost of his dead son, although the audience is meant to work this out somewhere along the way, the purpose of the father telling the story is to talk himself into suicide. I can'Read more

    RichieV – I’m not too thrilled with it either, I just wanted to get it all “out there”.

    He’s recounting his story to the ghost of his dead son, although the audience is meant to work this out somewhere along the way, the purpose of the father telling the story is to talk himself into suicide.

    I can’t 100% explain it because I haven’t quite got it in my head what I’m trying to do – I can “see” it, but I’m not sure if I can write it.

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