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  1. Posted: April 12, 2021In: Anniversary

    An ocean loving Swedish girl teams up with a trans teen, her mother and a rebellious teenager to find answer to her husbands fatal accident while working fruit picking. What they dum over is the dirty under belly of the working visa program putting all their lives in danger

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    Added an answer on April 12, 2021 at 8:52 pm

    Having experience with Australian immigration process, I'm into anything that highlights how draconian it is. That said, the logline is a bit convoluted. I would simplify it. I don't think the secondary characters need to be included, as it makes the logline confusing to read. A logline should sellRead more

    Having experience with Australian immigration process, I’m into anything that highlights how draconian it is. That said, the logline is a bit convoluted. I would simplify it. I don’t think the secondary characters need to be included, as it makes the logline confusing to read. A logline should sell the pure essence of the story, the central idea, and it doesn’t need too much information.

    “When she tries to learn more about the mysterious circumstances of her husband’s death, an ocean-loving immigrant from Sweden, who has recently arrived in Sydney, uncovers the dark underbelly of the immigration system, putting both her and her new friends all in danger in the process.”

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  2. Posted: April 5, 2021In: Drama

    A wealthy businessman who leads a double life manages to accept his homosexuality only after discovering that his son is struggling with the same conflict.

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    Replied to answer on April 7, 2021 at 10:34 pm

    In that case, the situation makes perfect sense, but I do think that information needs to be included in the logline, as the context is important.

    In that case, the situation makes perfect sense, but I do think that information needs to be included in the logline, as the context is important.

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  3. Posted: April 5, 2021In: Drama

    A wealthy businessman who leads a double life manages to accept his homosexuality only after discovering that his son is struggling with the same conflict.

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    Added an answer on April 5, 2021 at 11:37 pm

    My question, from reading the logline, is when/where is this set? Is it a period piece, set in a time when homosexuality was less accepted than it is today, or is it set in a a place where it is still frowned upon? I think these things are important to know, because, my initial response is 'why do tRead more

    My question, from reading the logline, is when/where is this set? Is it a period piece, set in a time when homosexuality was less accepted than it is today, or is it set in a a place where it is still frowned upon?
    I think these things are important to know, because, my initial response is ‘why do they struggle to accept their sexualities?’

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