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When a seemingly crazy man claims to be his wife’s rightful husband, a troubled counselor must must act like the seemingly crazy man if he’s to save his collapsing marriage.”
There's a lot going here, so I think it might be best to clarify a few things. First of all, who is the protagonist? The crazy man, the wife or the counsellor (who I'm assuming is the actual husband? That's something else that needs to be made clear). Secondly, what is the protagonist's goal or aim?Read more
There’s a lot going here, so I think it might be best to clarify a few things.
See lessFirst of all, who is the protagonist? The crazy man, the wife or the counsellor (who I’m assuming is the actual husband? That’s something else that needs to be made clear).
Secondly, what is the protagonist’s goal or aim? Whoever they are, what to do they want?
Thirdly, why is the counsellor’s marriage failing? Why does crazy man claim to be the husband, why must the counsellor act like him, and why does the wife belief this? If the story is a mystery, and these are questions that drive the plot, then considering asking explaining the situation that allow these things to happen?
A college student and his girlfriend discovers windows to spy on their neighbors during Christmas only to find out one of them invades their home.
Reading this, there are a few things I'd want clarifying. Firstly, why are they spying? Boredom? Fetish? Are they looking for something specific? Secondly, who invades their home? Why is it important that this person in particular is the invader? Also, it is unclear how and/or the spying and the homRead more
Reading this, there are a few things I’d want clarifying.
See lessFirstly, why are they spying? Boredom? Fetish? Are they looking for something specific?
Secondly, who invades their home? Why is it important that this person in particular is the invader?
Also, it is unclear how and/or the spying and the home invasion are connected?
Finally, what happens when their home is invaded? Do they retaliate? What is the person’s plan when invading?
At this point, this logline reads as an idea for a story, rather than a story distilled to its essence.
When an African American CIA operative is recruited by a secret global organisation, he must learn to master the art of time inversion, to stop a renegade Russian oligarch with precognition abilities, from starting World War III.
'Why does this organisation need this CIA operative' - I think Nolan should've been asked that question in the first place.
‘Why does this organisation need this CIA operative’ – I think Nolan should’ve been asked that question in the first place.
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