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  1. Posted: August 22, 2015In: Public

    After gaining superpowers, a group of clumsy and incompetent young adults set out to become the world?s first supervillains, but must first gain control over their city from the corrupt, but powerful superheroes who protect it.

    lukeseerbrown
    Added an answer on August 25, 2015 at 2:14 pm

    My first critique, so take it with a grain of salt. Sounds great on the surface but who am I meant to care about in this story? The Supervillains? (Antiheros) Isn't a hero's value measured in the might and/or cunning of his opponent. If the Superheros don't care what happens to their city, they sounRead more

    My first critique, so take it with a grain of salt.

    Sounds great on the surface but who am I meant to care about in this story?

    The Supervillains? (Antiheros)

    Isn’t a hero’s value measured in the might and/or cunning of his opponent.

    If the Superheros don’t care what happens to their city, they sound like weak adversaries, standing by while bad things happen.

    And I’d like to hear what the “Theme” is, and what the Supervillains risk losing at “All is lost”.

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