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A lonely teenager becomes romantically involved with a girl who recently lost her sister, after he fabricates the death of his twin brother, who abandoned him to attend a soccer-team summer camp.
I agree with why.kim, "who abandoned ..." just confuses the sentence, it also shortens the Logline for the better. "his twin brother's death" may read better than "the death of his twin brother" - makes it even shorter!
I agree with why.kim, “who abandoned …” just confuses the sentence, it also shortens the Logline for the better. “his twin brother’s death” may read better than “the death of his twin brother” – makes it even shorter!
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