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  1. Posted: July 18, 2013In: Public

    After moving into a new apartment, a famous writer sets up various cameras to spy on his strange neighbour.

    Magna Kruger
    Added an answer on July 18, 2013 at 9:58 pm

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  2. Posted: July 15, 2013In: Public

    On the run after robbing a bank during the great depression, two brothers find themselves trapped in the harsh region known as the Dust Bowl where a ruthless killer hunts them down.

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    Added an answer on July 18, 2013 at 9:11 pm

    Why is the killer hunting them down? For the money or did they do something that warrant this? They are two and he/she is one, in a vast region. Surely, they can kill him. Can he be their estranged father? Or a beautiful female alien who can only survive if she consumes a certain kind of metal onlyRead more

    Why is the killer hunting them down? For the money or did they do something that warrant this? They are two and he/she is one, in a vast region. Surely, they can kill him. Can he be their estranged father? Or a beautiful female alien who can only survive if she consumes a certain kind of metal only found on our planet? (like money) Just wondering. If I sat down in a movie like this what would I like to see? An unexpected turn would make it less predictable.

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  3. Posted: July 16, 2013In: Public

    14 months after a virus wipes out the human race, a lone survivor fights to stay alive on the empty streets of London, battling her own mind as she looks back at the life she lost.

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    Added an answer on July 18, 2013 at 8:43 pm

    This logline tells me that the protagonist is totally (sorry) screwed. She has no hope. Her life is going nowhere. All that is left is for her to die. Surely, she can't be alone? Help her!! Reward her with some sort of an utopia that she can only enter on merit. Her world has changed. The parametersRead more

    This logline tells me that the protagonist is totally (sorry) screwed. She has no hope. Her life is going nowhere. All that is left is for her to die. Surely, she can’t be alone? Help her!! Reward her with some sort of an utopia that she can only enter on merit. Her world has changed. The parameters will be different. Give her an ability triggered by die apocalypse she just survived. Give her a reason to live and a reason for the audience to root for her.

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