1. Posted: August 7, 2013In:

    When a Nigerian hooker working in Dubai escapes barely with her life after killing a man in self-defense, she makes a vow to wreak as much havoc as she can against the rich, corrupt and powerful in an all-out battle between the haves and have-nots.

    Marcus Hyndes

    Hey Sam I like your idea. it makes for a thrilling story. Maybe you could say as much with fewer words. Cheers.

    Hey Sam I like your idea. it makes for a thrilling story. Maybe you could say as much with fewer words. Cheers.

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  2. Posted: August 7, 2013In:

    After the boyfriend lost his memory because of a brain surgery,the girlfriend must pretend to get know the boy again for keep their relationship.

    Marcus Hyndes

    Good logline Weize, it's got all the makings of an intriguing story. Maybe you could introduce the boyfriend as 'a young man' and the girlfriends name eg. , Joanne, his girlfriend.... Cheers

    Good logline Weize, it’s got all the makings of an intriguing story. Maybe you could introduce the boyfriend as ‘a young man’ and the girlfriends name eg. , Joanne, his girlfriend….
    Cheers

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  3. Posted: August 7, 2013In:

    After the boyfriend lost his memory because of a brain surgery,the girlfriend must pretend to get know the boy again for keep their relationship.

    Marcus Hyndes

    Hey Weize, I like your logline. It sets up for an interesting story. I can only suggest a couple of minor changes: After a young man lost his memory because of brain surgery, (name), his girl friend, must pretend to know him in the hope of keeping their relationship.

    Hey Weize, I like your logline. It sets up for an interesting story. I can only suggest a couple of minor changes: After a young man lost his memory because of brain surgery, (name), his girl friend, must pretend to know him in the hope of keeping their relationship.

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