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To pay off his debts, a former boxer addicted to gambling is coerced by his loan shark into carrying out an attack against a famous footballer just months before the World Cup.
Got potential. Is there any aspect of your story that has a positive spin that could be worked into the logline ?
Got potential. Is there any aspect of your story that has a positive spin that could be worked into the logline ?
See lessA man who believes life has excluded him and a woman traumatized by childhood find connection through margin notes in a free library exchange copy of Persuasion, never suspecting the person who finally gets them lives next door.
‘… who gets them’ is vague for a grabby ending. How are they ‘gotten’? Similarly the first words are elusive ‘… life has excluded him’. Put him in a cell? The concept sound so good but the logline isn’t creating the need to read the pilot.
‘… who gets them’ is vague for a grabby ending. How are they ‘gotten’? Similarly the first words are elusive ‘… life has excluded him’. Put him in a cell? The concept sound so good but the logline isn’t creating the need to read the pilot.
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