1. Posted: June 23, 2022In:

    When confronted with violence in his new home, the son of a buddhist monk must defend himself while still staying true to his beliefs

    MartyDawes Penpusher

    When he is confronted with physical violence in his new home, the son of a buddhist monk must find a creative way to defend himself while staying true to his pacifist beliefs

    When he is confronted with physical violence in his new home, the son of a buddhist monk must find a creative way to defend himself while staying true to his pacifist beliefs

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  2. Posted: June 27, 2022In:

    When her family unexpectedly comes back into her life after years of estrangement, a young woman must confront her past and the people who will never accept her for who she is.

    MartyDawes Penpusher

    Overall it sounds great and i definitely think theres a great story there. I would just suggest maybe add more detail to the character? Maybe "A troubled young woman" ? something like that :)

    Overall it sounds great and i definitely think theres a great story there. I would just suggest maybe add more detail to the character? Maybe “A troubled young woman” ? something like that 🙂

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  3. Posted: June 22, 2022In:

    When a delusional young woman is confronted by the closure of her uncle’s vintage car dealership, she must travel cross-country to see it one last time.

    MartyDawes Penpusher

    Maybe put the event first and then the character?

    Maybe put the event first and then the character?

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