mateekaq – Reviews – Page 2

Posted: May 23, 2015In: Public

After gaining superhuman powers, a group of wannabe heroes run into a bunch of hijinxs when they decide they’d rather be super-villains.

Added an answer on May 27, 2015 at 12:46 am

I agree with the other comments here. It's a cool, different idea, but we don't really have a sense of who your antagonist is or where the conflict comes from. If your characters have decided they want to be supervillains, wouldn't they run into the problem of facing other, actual superheroes that fRead more

I agree with the other comments here. It’s a cool, different idea, but we don’t really have a sense of who your antagonist is or where the conflict comes from. If your characters have decided they want to be supervillains, wouldn’t they run into the problem of facing other, actual superheroes that foil their villainous plots? If not, then there’s not really a conflict, just a series of funny incidents. This sounds like something my boyfriend would love to see.

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After gaining superhuman powers, a group of wannabe heroes run into a bunch of hijinxs when they decide they’d rather be super-villains.

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