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Fiddle,young talented violin player is about to run away from most hated things in his life – the violin and his father that painfully bullies him into play all his life.Only thing that turns up as a obstacle is Fiddle?s evil mind, personified as a mysterious being that evokes a a very radical thoughts inside him.
Thank you,much appreciated. I went through all the notes you?ve written. This is supposed to be short play, I was up to put only essential things into my logline. What I wanted to perform as a essential im my screenwriting ( I?ve already written a screenplay, it doesn?t mean is written well though,IRead more
Thank you,much appreciated. I went through all the notes you?ve written.
This is supposed to be short play, I was up to put only essential things into my logline. What I wanted to perform as a essential im my screenwriting ( I?ve already written a screenplay, it doesn?t mean is written well though,I keep rewriting it every day) is how antagonist disturbs MC?s escape plan and forces him to carry out revenge.
Why and when the MC starts his journey away from the father and suffering is mentioned in the beginning of the story,but that?s not a breakpoint,twistpoint .( I just dont want to make it substantial )
To describe the stakes high enough, I changed the context of logline :
Young violin player,bullied by his father all his life into playing violin,finally braves himself to runaway and start a new life.Only thing turns up as a obstacle – his evil mind, personified by mysterious being that evokes radical thought – stay and punish all of those responsible for his suffering, once and for all.
I am struggling with this logline, I ve got so many ideas how to fullfil what you recomend, but everytime I find myself writing the whole story into a logline.
In advance, thank you very much for next advise.
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Thank you,much appreciated. I went through all the notes you?ve written. This is supposed to be short play, I was up to put only essential things into my logline. What I wanted to perform as a essential im my screenwriting ( I?ve already written a screenplay, it doesn?t mean is written well though,IRead more
Thank you,much appreciated. I went through all the notes you?ve written.
This is supposed to be short play, I was up to put only essential things into my logline. What I wanted to perform as a essential im my screenwriting ( I?ve already written a screenplay, it doesn?t mean is written well though,I keep rewriting it every day) is how antagonist disturbs MC?s escape plan and forces him to carry out revenge.
Why and when the MC starts his journey away from the father and suffering is mentioned in the beginning of the story,but that?s not a breakpoint,twistpoint .( I just dont want to make it substantial )
To describe the stakes high enough, I changed the context of logline :
Young violin player,bullied by his father all his life into playing violin,finally braves himself to runaway and start a new life.Only thing turns up as a obstacle – his evil mind, personified by mysterious being that evokes radical thought – stay and punish all of those responsible for his suffering, once and for all.
I am struggling with this logline, I ve got so many ideas how to fullfil what you recomend, but everytime I find myself writing the whole story into a logline.
In advance, thank you very much for next advise.
See less