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  1. Posted: July 13, 2012In: Public

    A broke college student attends an interview where he is forced by a megalomaniacal artist to break up with his girlfriend, tell off his landlord, and quit his temp job only to find that he has gone to the wrong interview.

    MattyB
    Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 11:24 am

    Is this better? "At a job interview a broke college student is forced by a psychotic artist to break up with his girlfriend, tell off his landlord, and quit his temp job only to find that he has gone to the wrong interview." Act 1 he is in his car getting ready for the interview Act 2 he is in the iRead more

    Is this better?

    “At a job interview a broke college student is forced by a psychotic artist to break up with his girlfriend, tell off his landlord, and quit his temp job only to find that he has gone to the wrong interview.”

    Act 1 he is in his car getting ready for the interview
    Act 2 he is in the interview and is given the option to leave (after the artist almost kills him with a blowtorch) but makes the decision to stay because he is fascinated by the project.

    It ends at PP2 when the person who was supposed to be interviewed shows up and he is tossed back to the ordinary world.

    Thanks for your advice!

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  2. Posted: July 13, 2012In: Public

    War Voices

    MattyB
    Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 9:35 am

    I need more details in the logline. I think you might have put your logline in the description section below it.

    I need more details in the logline. I think you might have put your logline in the description section below it.

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  3. Posted: July 13, 2012In: Public

    One bad order turns a coffeehouse into a battlefield.

    MattyB
    Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 9:31 am

    I can definitely see it! I have several friends who work in the service industry and have heard stories that could fit for this in a pinch. The logline leaves me with interesting visuals. My only suggestion would be to try it with more detail. Who are the main characters ? But to be honest, the simpRead more

    I can definitely see it! I have several friends who work in the service industry and have heard stories that could fit for this in a pinch. The logline leaves me with interesting visuals. My only suggestion would be to try it with more detail. Who are the main characters ? But to be honest, the simplicity is nice too.

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