Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
I Was A Mutant Beauty Queen: A disgraced beauty queen must embrace her inner "ugly" to defeat the mutant horde trapped in the bio-gen building with her and her co-workers.
Kind of like Resident Evil meets Legally Blonde.
Kind of like Resident Evil meets Legally Blonde.
See lessJacob has lost faith. When a woman who says she's from the future appears at his door with a grave warning, Jacob must decide whether to believe her or face the consequences.
>Jacob must decide whether to believe her or face the consequences. The first part of the logline is specific enough, but this is too vague, IMHO, and doesn't tell us what the stakes are or who the antagonist is.
>Jacob must decide whether to believe her or face the consequences.
See lessThe first part of the logline is specific enough, but this is too vague, IMHO, and doesn’t tell us what the stakes are or who the antagonist is.
In a future with anti-gravity tech, a gang of street-wise orphans help a celebrity "sky-runner" athlete accused of terrorism survive the planet’s deadly slums and destroy the cyborg general who framed him.
patrockable, I hear ya. However, I posted that earlier one to a popular scriptwriting blog and it was dragged over the coals until it was pulp -- people really did not like it / felt it had too much jargon specific to the world in it. As a lover of sci-fi, I'm used to figuring out sci-fi jargon by iRead more
patrockable, I hear ya. However, I posted that earlier one to a popular scriptwriting blog and it was dragged over the coals until it was pulp — people really did not like it / felt it had too much jargon specific to the world in it. As a lover of sci-fi, I’m used to figuring out sci-fi jargon by its context, so it doesn’t bother me. But I can see where it was a big turn-off for readers not attuned to doing that.
See less