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An ex-gangland gunsmith who renounced violence after converting to Islam faces an impossible dilemma ? to save her estranged family she must help extremists assassinate the US President
great logline. could "dilemma" be "choice" instead? i think theres more mystery when its a choice to be made..
great logline. could “dilemma” be “choice” instead? i think theres more mystery when its a choice to be made..
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Im worried that its too general to be gripping/ Maybe thats just in my mind. Ive read a few loglines and everything seems to be so dramatic or overly intriguing and I am worried I might try to be intriguing for the sake of being intriguing. Does that make sense? My story is a bit more understated thRead more
Im worried that its too general to be gripping/ Maybe thats just in my mind. Ive read a few loglines and everything seems to be so dramatic or overly intriguing and I am worried I might try to be intriguing for the sake of being intriguing. Does that make sense? My story is a bit more understated than that so I guess Im trying to figure how best to use the right words. Im working on revising this based on all the comments and will post that soon.
See lessAfter the head of a giant corporation discovers a malicious conspiracy, he works by night to bring down the very company he leads by day
I prefer the original logline to the one suggested above. Ive noticed that the usual strain of comments on loglines with too many descriptives call it well, too descriptive - they tell you to trim down. Going by that the original one sounds better to me. Unless Im missing some key point about loglinRead more
I prefer the original logline to the one suggested above. Ive noticed that the usual strain of comments on loglines with too many descriptives call it well, too descriptive – they tell you to trim down. Going by that the original one sounds better to me. Unless Im missing some key point about loglines.
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