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  1. Posted: May 15, 2013In: Public

    "An 86 year old man relives his past lives through hypnotic regression, but in one fateful session, a blurry vision shows him his possible next life and that his current one is about to end soon and the strange man from an unknown agency has to make the toughest moral decision."

    Michael Oliver
    Added an answer on May 15, 2013 at 4:31 pm

    Not quite what is actually happening, but I like it.

    Not quite what is actually happening, but I like it.

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  2. Posted: May 15, 2013In: Public

    Two cross country gun-runners hit and kill a strange old woman with their disguised 18- wheeler. They soon figure out something strange about the woman as she has cursed them to drive across a dark, twisted reality of the world that they once knew.

    Michael Oliver
    Added an answer on May 15, 2013 at 4:29 pm

    I actually like your better, thanks. I would change the DARK THINGS part, sounds too vague. "When two gun-runners hit and kill an old gypsy, they become cursed into a twisted reality and must discover how to escape before the dark denizens devour them."

    I actually like your better, thanks. I would change the DARK THINGS part, sounds too vague.

    “When two gun-runners hit and kill an old gypsy, they become cursed into a twisted reality and must discover how to escape before the dark denizens devour them.”

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  3. Posted: May 15, 2013In: Public

    Desperate for his father?s approval, a conceited journalist takes a job at his small town newspaper. But when he discovers a drug scandal brewing within the local football club, he pursues the story even though it will implicate his athlete brother.

    Michael Oliver
    Added an answer on May 15, 2013 at 4:23 pm

    It does sound better, smoother. Just don't turn it into a mathematical equation, by going too far. You've definitely got it down. It would make a great TV GUIDE description and that's kind of what they're looking for. The original sounds like a bumper before the previous show ends and before the nexRead more

    It does sound better, smoother. Just don’t turn it into a mathematical equation, by going too far. You’ve definitely got it down. It would make a great TV GUIDE description and that’s kind of what they’re looking for. The original sounds like a bumper before the previous show ends and before the next movie begins.

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