1. Posted: August 26, 2015In:

    When the most trusting man in America journeys to Nigeria to collect his expected inheritance promised to him in an e-mail by a prince, he must overcome bitter reality and find his prince in order to see the good in people once again.

    MichaelHag Penpusher

    That is a funny angle, but I've already developed the premise of a middle school counselor who enrages everyone with his trusting attitude.

    That is a funny angle, but I’ve already developed the premise of a middle school counselor who enrages everyone with his trusting attitude.

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  2. Posted: August 25, 2015In:

    On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy a beloved nephew.

    MichaelHag Penpusher

    Hi Mark, in loglines we usually omit character names: On the eve of his gay uncle?s anniversary dinner, a troubled man must again battle with alcohol and the impact it continues to have on the family; all the while celebrating enduring love. my two cents for you

    Hi Mark, in loglines we usually omit character names:
    On the eve of his gay uncle?s anniversary dinner, a troubled man must again battle with alcohol and the impact it continues to have on the family; all the while celebrating enduring love.
    my two cents for you

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  3. Posted: July 16, 2014In:

    The lives of an undefeated boxer and a former hitman intermingle on the corrupt and sinful streets of New Orleans as they join forces to save the they love city and the people in it from cataclysm

    MichaelHag Penpusher

    Interesting; personally, I would specify that this is during Katrina, it is something people can picture, rather than any old cataclysm.

    Interesting; personally, I would specify that this is during Katrina, it is something people can picture, rather than any old cataclysm.

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