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A sensitive murderer character of a novel faces agonizing dilemma when a mysterious reader wreaks havoc in the fictional world, forcing him to kill his friends as an exchange for letting him enter reality and start a new life.
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Maybe replacing 'hardships and malfunctions' with the actual example(s) of hardships and malfunctions would make it more specific. First of all, depending on the type of hardships that the disenchanted family man might encounter on his way home, viewers may/may not decide to watch the movie. Second,Read more
Maybe replacing ‘hardships and malfunctions’ with the actual example(s) of hardships and malfunctions would make it more specific.
First of all, depending on the type of hardships that the disenchanted family man might encounter on his way home, viewers may/may not decide to watch the movie. Second, regardless of what decision they make, they will know what to expect.
Is there an alien attack? Does he get a call from his wife, saying that she’s divorcing him? Is the nature of his hardship family-related, financial, supernatural, military, or sexual?
Or is his failing Oregon business the only hardship that he is facing? (in which case ‘hardships and malfunctions’ could probably be omitted altogether.)
For me, the type of hardship would really not matter – I just don’t want to be in a situation in which I expected an alien attack, only to realize that it was actually about his gas running out. Or something like that. 😉
See lessDeep in debt from a loan shark, a young couple makes a DO or DIE decision to pay back a loan by smuggle drugs out of South America. While attempting an on the edge roller coaster ride back home to Los Angeles
Like others said - grammar & the seemingly incomplete second sentence was confusing to me. Also, it's unclear what genre this is. So I don't know what I should expect from the movie. Is this something I would watch with my grandparents? My 5-year-old nephew? My date? Based on this log line, I coRead more
Like others said – grammar & the seemingly incomplete second sentence was confusing to me.
Also, it’s unclear what genre this is. So I don’t know what I should expect from the movie. Is this something I would watch with my grandparents? My 5-year-old nephew? My date?
Based on this log line, I could imagine this being a comedy (roller coaster ride – not too gloomy and dark) or thriller (loan sharks chasing the couple) or drama (with lots of tears and revelations in the process of committing crime and recovering from debt.)
Maybe putting some kind of adjective in front of ‘young couple’ would help? i.e. A couple of ex-cons would probably react differently to the exact same situation compared to a couple of college professors (or a couple of cleaners, gardeners, funny, gloomy, violent, introverted, etc.) This might reveal the genre and imply what readers/viewers should expect.
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