1. Posted: June 26, 2015In:

    A downtrodden scientist learns hard lessons from the unintended consequences of time travel as he attempts to improve his present fortunes…but at what cost?

    mmean

    Good points all. I definitely took some inspiration from BTF 2 for the story, but the logline isn't much to explain it. Back to the drawing board.

    Good points all. I definitely took some inspiration from BTF 2 for the story, but the logline isn’t much to explain it. Back to the drawing board.

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  2. Posted: June 26, 2015In:

    A downtrodden scientist learns hard lessons from the unintended consequences of time travel as he attempts to improve his present fortunes…but at what cost?

    mmean

    Good points everyone, thank you for your feedback! I'll be addressing everything in the next version. Thanks!

    Good points everyone, thank you for your feedback! I’ll be addressing everything in the next version. Thanks!

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  3. Posted: June 26, 2015In:

    A downtrodden scientist learns hard lessons from the unintended consequences of time travel as he attempts to improve his present fortunes…but at what cost?

    mmean

    Thanks Lee, I appreciate the feedback. I wasn't sure about the question at the end, that will probably come out. You're right about it being vague, I'm thinking on how to fix it so it matches the story better

    Thanks Lee, I appreciate the feedback. I wasn’t sure about the question at the end, that will probably come out. You’re right about it being vague, I’m thinking on how to fix it so it matches the story better

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